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- Une journée entre langues, réflexions et petites victoires
Français17 correctionsCorrectedLast activity: 2026-04-04
marblemenow98Une journée entre langues, réflexions et petites victoires
Heureusement, je n’ai pas travaillé au lycée à West Haven grâce au Vendredi saint. Puis, j’ai conduit jusqu’à la maison de mes parents et j’ai mangé un petit-déjeuner à deux œufs brouillés avec du riz et de l’huile de chili. De plus, le samoyède de ma sœur, Kodo, était heureux de me voir lorsque je suis arrivée chez mes parents. Donc, je lui ai fait un câlin et j’ai mis de la musique classique pour que Kodo puisse se reposer. Après le petit-déjeuner, j’ai regardé au moins 20 réels sur Instagram pour l’apprentissage des langues. Malheureusement, c’est difficile de trouver des films et des séries en norvégien à cause de vivre aux États-Unis. Je pourrais changer mon adresse IP avec un VPN, mais ça ne changera pas le fait que le contenu norvégien est mort sur YouTube. Précédemment, je préfère les courtes vidéos sur Instagram parce que je peux regarder une étrangère sur le pad thaï en norvégien ou une vidéo sur les expériences d’une relation romantique avec un homme néerlandais en anglais. Après mon voyage à Bruxelles, j’ai voulu apprendre le néerlandais pour que je lise des romans et des livres de non-fiction à la librairie de Passa Porta à Bruxelles à l’avenir. Au début, j’ai déjà regardé plusieurs vidéos en français, en allemand, en néerlandais et en anglais. Comme j’ai les quelques bases des langues en néerlandais, j’ai réussi à comprendre quelques phrases grâce à l’apprentissage de l’allemand. Cependant, je n’étais pas complètement satisfaite par le fait que je ne pouvais pas comprendre le néerlandais. Donc, je suis en train d’apprendre cette langue avec Instagram et YouTube. Parfois, j’utilise Duolingo, mais cette appli n’est pas toujours bonne pour apprendre une langue pour moi. Chaque fois, je traduis des phrases inutiles de l’anglais au néerlandais. Je gaspille beaucoup de temps sur Duolingo quand j’apprends le norvégien ou le néerlandais en apprenant des phrases étranges. Donc, je remplace le temps pour l’apprentissage des langues sur Instagram. À ce moment, j’utilise Duolingo pour jouer aux échecs avec Oscar.
- Leadership
English12 correctionsCorrectedLast activity: 2026-04-03
Apres-midiLeadership
Traditionally, the ideas of genders have shaped society for many centuries. From ideas that only men could be rulers of Kingdoms to historical notions of women’s roles in the home, today’s society’s gender stereotypes are more flexible and varied. I want to dive into that topic in order to consider different opportunities of self-realization for both men and women primarily in the family life. Historically, men are supposed to be breadwinners in the family. In their role they’re assigned to provide stable income and work outside of the house to support their family. For this particular reason, they are expected to be strong, emotionally reserved and indefensible. But in current leaving conditions it’s possible for women to be breadwinners and there is nothing weird about it. A woman also can be harsh and compatible, and support her family by providing primary source of income. I think it depends on the family and women’s personality. The traditional gender role often casts men as a main decision-maker in the family but over the years this perception has also been changing. Men were presumed to be responsible for solving financial issues, planning family holidays and daily life. The role suggests that men more rational and cool-headed. I agree with that point. But I also think that a woman can decide on matters like renovation, family plans if she has a desire and fanatical opportunity to make it happen. To conclude, I’d like to point out that all gender roles depend exclusively on a particular family. A husband and a wife should decide for themselves what works best for them and how to share roles mare effectively and according to their key strengths.
- Saya Kerja
Bahasa Indonesia5 correctionsCorrectedLast activity: 2026-04-02
My-TigelaarSaya Kerja
Saya biasanya membantu mahasiswa dengan cetak dan tekonologi dan komputer kerena sekolah ini punya orang-orang yang lebih tua. Saya lebih suka mahasiswa yang lebih tua daripada lebih mura kerena mura yang nakal. Saya tidak kerja SD atau SMP. Perpustakaanku di antara SMA dan universitas. Mahasiswa biasanya lebih tua yang masih berkerjaan dan belajar, tidak anak-anak.
- Hi 👋 English2 correctionsCorrectedLast activity: 2026-03-31
reda_ladooHi 👋
I’m a pretty open-minded and easy-going person, and I’m looking to meet new people and make some cool friends. In my free time, I’m really into sports (especially football and hiking) and I love travelling and discovering new cultures. I’m also a big fan of music and I always enjoy grabbing a good coffee or checking out new spots in the city. If you’re up for a chat, sharing a hobby, or just hanging out, feel free to reach out!”
- can anyone help me with my ENG SpeakingEnglish0 correctionsLast activity: 2026-03-29
Disa_12can anyone help me with my ENG Speaking
can anyone help me? I want to know my english level like B1. But i need B2
- The holidays English0 correctionsLast activity: 2026-03-28
DragonSaneThe holidays
For me, the holidays (vacations) is a good Time for play with our friends.
- The holidays English0 correctionsLast activity: 2026-03-28DragonSane
The holidays
For me, the holidays (vacations) is a good Time for play with our friends.
- What do women need for happinessEnglish0 correctionsLast activity: 2026-03-26Apres-midi
What do women need for happiness
Happiness is an ephemeral definition of the state, which means being fully pleased with current living conditions, and state of affairs. It’s a feeling when you are ready to create, when you feel an emotional lift. You are love people around you, experience things in a positive way, and see the world a little bit through rose-colored glasses. Women are fragile, light-hearted creatures who are depend on positive feelings like happiness. An unhappy women is like a flower which dies without water. To my perspective the first thing which a woman needs for happiness is their own-earned income. In this case, they don’t need to ask someone to do their nails or hair, for example. It an important factor which gives women freedom in spending her own money. The second and most important one is beauty. Being and feeling beautiful is the holy grail for women. Wearing nice clothes gives them confidents and the are ready to share their bright smile with the world. The third thing is having a passion. By that I mean a hobby which would enrich her life and takes up some time. it’s crucial to have interests which inspires a person and gives sense of purpose.
- mein tag
Deutsch0 correctionsLast activity: 2026-03-25
af999mein tag
Heute gehe ich nach universtät, mein universtät ist 3 stunde von mein hause ich habe ein WG da aber gehe ich da und jetzt ich bin im hause ich spreche ein bisschen deutsch (A1)
- La Mia Famiglia
Italiano / Lingua italiana0 correctionsLast activity: 2026-03-25
goodbyehorsesLa Mia Famiglia
La mia famiglia ha cinque persona. Ho una sorella e un fratello maggiore. Mia sorella studia pubblicità all’università, e mio fratello si sta laureando nel maggio. Ho anche due cane, entrambi le ragazze. I miei genitori entrambi lavorare, e io e i miei fratelli andiamo a scuola. I miei paterni tutti vivano lontano, così non vedo loro spesso.
- NormalfallDeutsch0 correctionsLast activity: 2026-03-24
lakosgaborNormalfall
Vielen Dank für die Korrektur. Hier die korrigierte Variante: Einmal in der Woche spiele ich Tischtennis mit meiner großen Tochter. Dieses Training findet in einer Budapester Villa statt, in der fünf Tische nebeneinander aufgestellt sind, wo man Tischtennis spielen kann. Es ist verhältnismäßig eng, und im Raum hallt es sehr, besonders wenn mehrere gleichzeitig sprechen. Heute kam ein Kollege einige Minuten zu spät, und man hörte gleich, dass er angekommen war, denn er begann sofort laut mit seinem Trainer zu sprechen. Obwohl es einige Tische weiter von uns (meiner Tochter und mir) passierte, hörte man seine Stimme praktisch während der ganzen Trainingsstunde. Am liebsten hätte ich ihn gefragt, ob er auch trainieren oder nur ein Gespräch führen wollte. Im Nachhinein musste ich feststellen, dass er sich nur wie sonst verhalten hatte; wahrscheinlich verbringt er die Trainingszeit immer so. Diese Art und Weise der Kommunikation richtete sich gar nicht gegen mich (oder andere Kollegen im Raum). Das ist also nur der Normalfall bei ihm...
- One cold clear morningEnglish0 correctionsLast activity: 2026-03-21
55OlgaOne cold clear morning
In the last few days we often have fog. It’s going from the sea. The city mostly don’t get this fog, as Kaliningrad is quite far from the sea. My country house isn’t so far of it, so I often get some of the fog, however I’m not so close to the sea to be covered with that fog completely. So the sun is also delights me, while at the sea shore much less of the sun these days. Today was the perfect morning in the anticyclone - clear and cold. I chose it to cycle at the dawn and was completely right. It was so peaceful, quiet morning which has started with the deep blue sky, with the cold air filled with bird’s voices and thin streams of fog above fields and roads. As the sun started to rise, these fog’s streams were floated towards it as if they were magnetically attracted to the sun. In one moment the fog enveloped all the air, but it wasn’t too thick and the sun still was shining through it. It was so beautiful - trees and fields look through the translucent fog and above it were laying the bright sun shine. The sun is so strong today that quickly scattered the fog. And here it is already shining in its full strength fastly warming the ground and air that had cooled down overnight. I’m so glad with my morning ride accompanied by this beautiful sceneries. Also it delights me that people so afraid of cold and like to sleep longer, that even though today is Saturday I was alone on the bicycle path. When people just are waking up, I already back from my morning walk, full of strength and delight with each new day especially the warm and sunny one. As it well known in Russia - a Siberian is not someone who doesn’t freeze, but someone who dresses warmly. It seems that those guys in tents, which I saw by my way this morning strongly believe in this, as they decided to spend this cool March night in a tent... So I wish you also dress warmly and don’t lose the best part of the day which certainly is at the dawn.