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- Grandparents and their role in the familyEnglish20 correctionsCorrectedLast activity: 2026-04-15
Apres-midiGrandparents and their role in the family
Most of us have fond memories of our grandparents from when we were children. At some point, when times get hard, we may revisit special moments that makes us feel warmth and serenity. Sometimes those memories involve our grandparents. Today I want to broach the topic of grandparents and their contribution to the institute of the family life. One of the most important figures if my childhood was my grandpa Victor. I fondly remember his majestic look. He was extremely tall and slim man. He had very big palms which were always warm and gave a sense of safety to my tiny body when he holed me tightly. I remember that I dreary loved sitting on his knees on any family reunions or laying on his stomach listening to how his belly “talks” while he was watching TV. I liked studding his bold head, peering into every hair and birthmark. He was an incredibly caring granddad. He picked me up from school every day, caring immense backpack and listening to my childish chirruping. I told him everything and he always agreed with my radical points of views. He truly believed in dreams and goals and tried hard to inspire independence and perseverance in me. He always said that I am the person who is able to succeed in anything I started. However, sometimes even he considered me too stubborn and we often had discords on this matter. He worked hard to support my hobbies and interests. When i wasn’t accepted in art school because I was too small he had made an improvised easel and we painted pictures whole summer. I still keep them and sometimes review them tenderly. To conclude, I want to add that grandparents shape our outlook tremendously because they are retired and have free time and a valuable life experience that they use again, raising their grandchildren while their parents work long hours to support their family. Thanks to their hard work and patience because now we have special memories that we can revisit and receives those rays of light and warmth.
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- adventureEnglish1 correctionsCorrectedLast activity: 2026-04-15
JSergeadventure
Fauns are nice creatures according to most of the books and movies. They are not exactly goats, at least this one, but this isn’t exactly a movie or a book. This one had features which still reminded me of a goat but the more I thought about it the more I saw a sheep before me. ”You are ok?” a high pitched voice asked me. I slowly sat down, though I think there wasn’t much of an actual change in my position, because in a bean chair you were always lying, technically. This was the time when I decided to be so precise about my words, said not only to myself, but actually not said but thought. ”I was just sleeping” I said to explain, because I definitely heard a bit of worry in the question I was given. Faun lady gave me a small nod, but I noticed that her facial expression changed to a serious one. Not as if to make me feel bad. She just went right to her table and sat down on her studies. No question on how I got here, who I was and if I needed any help. ”I was just wondering how to get to the Time section?”,” Is there any way to travel around the library, not by taking a camp around the maze of shelves? ” I wanted to ask these questions, I actually needed to ask them if I wanted to get anywhere today. Also, I wanted to know how much time I had slept. But I understood that this one is not trying to help and probably is busy. The cause for such a thought could have been the bubble which was made around the table, but I knew myself that it wasn’t very polite to intrude on someone in the middle of a hard work myself, so I left. My thoughts have changed after about thirty minutes of following the arrows. Throughout that time I managed to think about the rudeness of the faun lady, curse this library, I also discovered that my phone was still having the function of the clock, so with not very hard questions I could find presumable amount of time I was sleeping, which occurred to be about five hours, and by the same way I knew how much time I was walking from my last stop on the bean chair. At last I was at the ”Time” section of the library. It would have been madness if it wasn’t for desperation from tiredness. The first thing I decided to do wasn’t look for any kind of books. I climbed on top of the shelf to see if there were any near cozy zones where I could sit with my books. There wasn’t a single one around me, and the closest one was from there I just came. I started looking for books. It occurred to be a much bigger adventure than I originally expected. From top to the bottom of the first shelf, there was not a single book with the symbols on which I recognised. I had no idea where this section ended and started. So after a careful look around the first four bookcases, I started looking for any familiar signs in a random way by scattering the whole tunnels made out of books from both sides, hopefully without ceiling and the floor. It took me twice to find what I was looking for. But even then I was left speechless. There were about four books in Latin. Although I was glad to find any kind of hope for understanding anything, which this book was, I was too far from understanding Latin enough to learn something from it. Presumably I was somewhere between knowing that Latin existed as a language somewhere in the past and being able to recognise it, but being not sure in it, and there also was the circumstance of this being the only sign I could actually make sense of. Anyways, clearly there was no hope in finding any books which I could read. In a matter of minutes I got sure of it by checking. There were only two rows of the books with normal writing on them, which didn’t look like triangles with multiple designs, or moving letters. I had the wisest idea for all of my life. I decided to carry back some of these books. It was impossible that I would ever come back here voluntarily and it would be stupid of me to go back empty handed.
- Revelation of natureEnglish16 correctionsCorrectedLast activity: 2026-04-14
55OlgaRevelation of nature
In April you can watch nature in its special gentle condition. It’s time when buds on trees are turning to young leaves. These leaves are very small and glossy, very gentle and pretty ones. They don’t give a shadow yet, but make trees and the world around brighter and more beautiful. I like look at these young leaves and through it to the blue sky and to the warm spring sun which rays yet still can reach me through young leaves. The sun shines as if through a translucent veil. I admire this picture, it’s a kind of nature revelation. I can enjoy it just two times in a year- in April, while leaves are just opening and in October, when they are falling and again gave this special vail affect. In summer leafage is too thick, it doesn’t let the sun rays go through it. In winter trees are too bare and besides the sun usually even doesn’t try to reach me. Poets often praise dense canopy, saving shadow and so on. Our weather is so, that usually we don’t need those shelters. Rather we want to be open to the sun and its warmth. In addition, there are ofen winds which reduce the perceived temperature. So I always reach for the sun like a young shoot. And now it’s especially pleasant to sit in a chair under the warm sun, looking at the awakening nature, listening the birds and understanding that you have absolutely everything to be happy.
- yo estudio español (castellano)
Español / Castellano4 correctionsCorrectedLast activity: 2026-04-07
kira019yo estudio español (castellano)
Quiero transferencia a escuela tecnica. Por que, mi escuela tiene direcion de ciencias sociales y este no me gusta. muy interesnte matematica y otas temas
- The rage of the elementsEnglish17 correctionsCorrectedLast activity: 2026-04-0655Olga
The rage of the elements
What a shame that I lost yesterday’s sunset! The weather forecast said there can be rain, becides, the wind was quite strong. So I wasn’t resist much, believing that the conditions don’t suitable I stayed at home. How cruelly I was deceived, how pity I felt seeing the beautiful colors of sunset which just partly reached my windows and not to see it in all its beauty on the sea shore... To the morning the wind was going to become even stronger, so I wasn’t going to go to the sunrise too. However, I awaked at half past four and was desperate this time not to do the same mistake as yesterday. The wind is really quite strong, although it isn’t so bad, as I was expected. We are just forgot what strong winds are, during our unlikely calm and cold winter. The last stormy gusts were yet in December. But now the elements return to fun and rage on the Baltic again. The sea and the wind now are rightful owners of the coast. They covered up the man’s track, making the coast completely wild and free of people’s presence. It’s really uncomfortable on the shore under this strong wind. However, I know a quiet harbor, where you are quite protected from the westerly wind. Huge pine trees here don’t wave their branches so furiously, although even they are time to time swaying и dangerously creaking. I can hear and see huge waves which driven by the wind to the shore, see an abundance of foam and spray over the water, but here I’m not so open to the wind and can quite comfortable to met the sunrise. The colors of it are a bit pale today, but anyway I’m happy that I’ve come. The riot of the elements is mesmerizing by its strength, power and wild beauty. Certainly it worth those efforts and minor inconveniences to be here, to breathe this air and see this rage of the elements.
- Entre immersion linguistique et retour à l’anglaisFrançais14 correctionsCorrectedLast activity: 2026-04-06
marblemenow98Entre immersion linguistique et retour à l’anglais
Après avoir parlé français avec des connaissances au restaurant au centre-ville de New Haven, c’était vraiment difficile de penser uniquement en anglais. Pendant une heure et demie, j’ai parlé avec trois personnes de mon voyage à Bruxelles et à Liège ainsi que de mon enfance. C’était un grand défi de comprendre parce qu’il y avait trois conversations de groupe près de moi. Parfois, je n’arrivais pas à distinguer les mots, mais j’ai compris l’essentiel des réponses. Donc, j’ai mis beaucoup d’énergie à comprendre les autres et à en apprendre davantage sur la Suisse et sur les restaurants préférés des autres à New Haven. Puis, j’ai conduit jusqu’à la maison de mes parents près de la plage de West Haven. Au début, c’était dur de penser uniquement en anglais, même si l’anglais est ma langue maternelle. Chaque fois que je parle français ou allemand pendant une heure et demie ou plusieurs heures, je trouve qu’il reste un défi de changer de langue dans ma tête. Honnêtement, j’avais le seum à l’idée de postuler à un poste d’analyste de données dans une entreprise d’éducation en anglais. J’ai pensé la majorité du temps en français en lisant des commentaires sur la situation de la langue française au Québec. Dans une communauté francophone, j’ai vu différentes opinions et j’ai appris davantage sur la frustration de préserver le français dans un environnement majoritairement anglophone. Bref, je me suis rendu compte qu’il est essentiel de trouver un équilibre entre le français et l’anglais au Québec. Cependant, je vis aux États-Unis et je veux postuler à un emploi comme analyste de données à distance. Donc, j’ai regardé une vidéo d’Atuno en anglais sur ses opinions concernant l’apprentissage des langues, notamment le coréen, le portugais, le russe, l’espagnol et le français. Ses trois meilleures langues sont le coréen, le russe (sa langue maternelle) et le portugais du Brésil. Selon moi, les meilleures langues sont le français, l’allemand et le norvégien. J’adore le français et l’allemand parce que ce sont les premières langues que j’ai réussi à apprendre. Je bénéficie aussi de l’aide de professeurs sur italki et d’heures de conversation à l’université de Cornell chaque semaine.
- Je cherche un amiFrançais2 correctionsCorrectedLast activity: 2026-04-05
Kacia06Je cherche un ami
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- Spring daysEnglish13 correctionsCorrectedLast activity: 2026-04-0555Olga
Spring days
The first spring month has passed. It took out with it remnants of snow and winter, awakening nature. It was incredibly stable, quite and dry March, with lots of sun during the day and clear sky with many stars at night, which also means warm days with cool nights. There wasn’t strong winds, so I was lucky and swam almost each morning. However, there were some who weren’t so happy with the calm sea. It’s our Baltic surfers. I often saw them those days while they were drifting on their boards on the calm sea surface. I don’t like them much, as surfers always mean crowd. It seems they have a heightened herd instinct, as they can’t come alone, there is always a group of them. They are coming on lots of cars, with accompanying persons and a photographer of course. It’s always a crowd, which making noise and leave behind themselve trash.. Their days have come after all. The most volatile month of the year is here. April by its custom bringing one extreme after another - one day is extremely warm, the other is very cold, one day is calm, and the other is taking a hurricane and winds. West winds have started to rise the waves, putting a cross over my morning swimming for at least a week. At the same time the surfers time has come, they are already here, with all their belongings and most importantly with photographers. Actually I have nothing against surfing itself. There is rather their approach to it which is annoying. Anyway it’s a sin to complain while it’s nice spring time and you are completely free and independent of nothing. So let’s instead enjoy each of the moment which the life giving us.
- it is for my b1test goethe
Deutsch1 correctionsCorrectedLast activity: 2026-04-04
Douha18rymit is for my b1test goethe
Hallo Tom , wie geht es dir? Ich hoffe, es geht dir gut. Ich habe lange nichts von dir gehört und vermisse dich sehr! vielen Dank für deine Einladung. Ich habe mich sehr darüber gefreut und komme gern zu deiner Party.Das wird bestimmt sehr schön. Zuerst möchte ich sagen, dass ich dir bei den Vorbereitungen helfen kann. Außerdem finde ich, dass ich Essen und Getränke mitbringen kann, weil das sehr praktisch ist. Zum Schluss möchte ich noch sagen, dass ich am Samstag komme und zwei Tage bleiben werde. Hast du Lust, dass wir alles zusammen vorbereiten? Ich freue mich sehr auf deine Antwort. Liebe Grüße Douha