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Revelation of nature

Revelation of nature

Revelation of natureThe sun shines as if through a translucent veil.Rather we want to be open to the sun and its warmth.So I always reach for the sun like a young shoot.

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Revelation of nature

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Revelation of nature

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In April you can watch nature in its special gentle condition.

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In April you can watch nature in its special gentle state.

In April you can watch nature in its special gentle condistionate.

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It’s time when buds on trees are turning to young leaves.

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It’s the time when buds on trees are turning into young leaves.

It’s the time when buds on trees are turning into young leaves.

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These leaves are very small and glossy, very gentle and pretty ones.

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These leaves are very small and glossy, such gentle and pretty ones.

These leaves are very small and glossy, verysuch gentle and pretty ones.

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They don’t give a shadow yet, but make trees and the world around brighter and more beautiful.

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They don’t give shade yet, but make trees and the surrounding world brighter and more beautiful.

They don’t give a shadowe yet, but make trees and the wosurld arounding world brighter and more beautiful.

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I like look at these young leaves and through it to the blue sky and to the warm spring sun which rays yet still can reach me through young leaves.

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I like looking at these young leaves and through it to the blue sky and the warm spring sun by which its rays yet still can reach me.

I like looking at these young leaves and through it to the blue sky and to the warm spring sun by which its rays yet still can reach me through young leaves.
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I like looking at these young leaves and through them to the blue sky and to the warm spring sun whose rays yet still can reach me through young leaves.

I like looking at these young leaves and through ithem to the blue sky and to the warm spring sun whichose rays yet still can reach me through young leaves.

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The sun shines as if through a translucent veil.

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I admire this picture, it’s a kind of nature revelation.

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I admire this picture. It’s a kind of natural revelation.

I admire this picture,. iIt’s a kind of natureal revelation.

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I can enjoy it just two times in a year- in April, while leaves are just opening and in October, when they are falling and again gave this special vail affect.

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I can enjoy it just twice each year - in April while leaves are just opening and in October when they are falling and again give this special veil effect.

I can enjoy it just two timces in each year - in April, while leaves are just opening and in October, when they are falling and again gaive this special vaeil aeffect.
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I can enjoy it just two times in a year- in April, while leaves are just opening and in October, when they are falling and again giving this special veil effect.

I can enjoy it just two times in a year- in April, while leaves are just opening and in October, when they are falling and again gaiveing this special vaeil aeffect.

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In summer leafage is too thick, it doesn’t let the sun rays go through it.

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In summer leafage is too thick, not letting the sun rays go through it.

In summer leafage is too thick, it doesnot letting the sun rays go through it.

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In winter trees are too bare and besides the sun usually even doesn’t try to reach me.

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In winter trees are too bare and, besides, the sun usually doesn’t try to even reach me.

In winter trees are too bare and, besides, the sun usually even doesn’t try to even reach me.

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Poets often praise dense canopy, saving shadow and so on.

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Poets often praise a dense canopy, its rescuing shade and so on.

Poets often praise a dense canopy, itsav rescuing shadowe and so on.

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Our weather is so, that usually we don’t need those shelters.

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Our weather is such that usually we don’t need these shelters.

Our weather is so,uch that usually we don’t need thoese shelters.

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Rather we want to be open to the sun and its warmth.

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In addition, there are ofen winds which reduce the perceived temperature.

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In addition, there are often winds which reduce the perceived temperature.

In addition, there are often winds which reduce the perceived temperature.

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So I always reach for the sun like a young shoot.

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And now it’s especially pleasant to sit in a chair under the warm sun, looking at the awakening nature, listening the birds and understanding that you have absolutely everything to be happy.

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And now it’s especially pleasant to sit in a chair under the warm sun, looking at the awakening nature, listening to the birds and understanding that you’ve got absolutely everything to be happy about.

And now it’s especially pleasant to sit in a chair under the warm sun, looking at the awakening nature, listening to the birds and understanding that you have got absolutely everything to be happy about.
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And now it’s especially pleasant to sit in a chair under the warm sun, looking at the awakening nature, listening to the birds and understanding that you have absolutely everything to be happy.

And now it’s especially pleasant to sit in a chair under the warm sun, looking at the awakening nature, listening to the birds and understanding that you have absolutely everything to be happy.