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- Voyager malgré la peur
Français0 correctionsLast activity: 2026-01-08
marblemenow98Voyager malgré la peur
Si j’avais gagné à la loterie, j’aurais voyagé autour du monde. Par exemple, je serais allé(e) en Allemagne et en Autriche parce que je voudrais améliorer mon allemand en parlant avec des locuteurs natifs. Même si j’avais peur de parler allemand dans les pays germanophones, je voudrais surmonter ma crainte de passer pour stupide.
- Mes projets de recherche et hypothèsesFrançais0 correctionsLast activity: 2026-01-08marblemenow98
Mes projets de recherche et hypothèses
Si j’avais fait mon doctorat en psychologie, j’aurais mené des recherches sur l’apprentissage des langues chez les femmes autistes, car je voudrais écrire un document de recherche sur des sujets qui m’intéressent : l’autisme et les langues étrangères, afin de contribuer à un domaine de niche. Cette année, j’avais déjà commencé mon nouvel emploi comme assistante de recherche dans un laboratoire psychologique à l’université de Yale. La semaine prochaine, je recevrai une formation avant de travailler dans le laboratoire. D’ici la fin du mois, j’aurai aidé les doctorants et les postdoctorants dans leurs projets de recherche sur la santé et les émotions. Si j’avais eu plus de temps, j’aurais lu tous les documents de recherche de mon laboratoire en ligne sur Google Scholar. Par conséquent, je comprenais mieux la recherche et la psychologie comportementale. Dans ma dernière année de doctorat, j’aurai choisi mon sujet de thèse. Si j’avais fait mon doctorat dans le même laboratoire que celui où je travaille actuellement, j’aurais écrit ma thèse sur l’influence des langues sur les mémoires traumatiques. Il faut que je recherche un sujet qui m’intéresse. C’est la raison pour laquelle je voudrais étudier comment les personnes multilingues se souviennent de leurs souvenirs traumatiques dans leur langue maternelle par rapport à leurs langues étrangères. Lorsque j’essaie de me souvenir de mes expériences traumatiques avec mon ex-petit ami en anglais, je crie toujours. Je me sens fâchée qu’il m’ait abandonnée pendant notre voyage en raquettes à neige sur un sommet des Adirondacks. En revanche, il est plus compliqué de ressentir les mêmes émotions avec la même intensité pour des souvenirs traumatiques. Je dois traduire toutes les pensées et tous les sentiments dans ma tête en anglais avant de parler ou d’écrire dans mon cahier personnel.
- A real winter
English0 correctionsLast activity: 2026-01-06
55OlgaA real winter
A real winter has come to us by the New Year’s holidays. It has come and it seems firmly established itself. A real winter which we usually don’t have in our region. A real one - cold and covering all around with a white blanket. We’ve got a lot of snow, the temperatures are below zero even during the day and at nights it’s at all are often quite frosty. Yes, our sky now is untypical clear and blue, it’s certainly great, however the temperatures below zero bring me a lot of problems. Even if I won’t take into account that cold and snow are uncomfortable for most of my activities, they increase my expenses on electricity and firewoods, it’s also difficult to move by my bike now, and the water in my country house has freezed and now I forced to get it from snow. From snow! Do you know how much of water you can get from a ten-liter bucketing? When the snow finally melt, there will be just a bit of water on the bottom, just a few millilitres out of 10 liters of snow! All because that snow is consists of 95 % of air. Snow looks so white and clear, that it could seems that the water also will be good and clear. This is absolutely not true. Even while the snow is falling, it’s already collecting dust and harmful substances from the atmosphere. And while it’s lying it also get nothing good. There can be bacteria and microbes, chemicals and even radioactive substances. So, snow is natural absorbent and can be used only for technical purposes. Perhaps the need to remove snow is its most harmless consequence for me. It’s always pleasant to work a bit outdoors, under the blue sky and the scant rays of the winter sun. It seems I’ve never seen so much of snow here. The waypaths in my garden now look almost like tonnels - both side of it snowdrifts rise. I can’t imagine how long it’s going to melt and when finally all will return to its circle. For now forecasts aren’t promise to us nothing good. So all can I do is to hope that the climatic winter will leave us at least earlier than the calendar one comes, although better it happens as soon as possible.
- A Bohémian’s life in London n° 13English0 correctionsLast activity: 2026-01-05
RuaA Bohémian’s life in London n° 13
” Calais....Calais !!.This is Calais!! Passengers bound for London should head towards the station exit to take the shuttle to Calais Maritime station to board the ferry plateform number two.” The loudspeaker repeated the annoucement in lood booming voice
- A Bohémian’s life in London n° 12English0 correctionsLast activity: 2026-01-05Rua
A Bohémian’s life in London n° 12
After passing the stations of Amiens and Boulogne sur Mer, therer was little time before arriving in Calais. He statted his backpack and, like others travelers, he took his large suitcase down the luggage rack
- Ma chambreFrançais0 correctionsLast activity: 2026-01-05
ddecomposerMa chambre
J’adore ma chambre. Elle a des feuilles de papier sur les murs (mes écrits), du velours, du cuir, de l’argent et des os. J’adore peindre ici pendant des heures. Je dors dans un cercueil pendant la journée, et je sors la nuit.
- Il film ”Nurenberg”
Italiano / Lingua italiana0 correctionsLast activity: 2026-01-04
lakosgaborIl film ”Nurenberg”
Ieri pomeriggio sono andato al cinema Urania, un lussuoso palazzo nel centro di Budapest. Ho visto il nuovo film americano ”Nürnberg”, con il magnifico attore Russell Crowe. Sebbene il film sia durato quasi due ore e mezza, è stato avvincente per tutto il tempo... Il titolo del film mi ha interessato molto perché non sapevo che la città tedesca di Nürnberg avesse un nome inglese simile, ma scritto in modo leggermente diverso: Nurenberg. Ho anche notato che molti ungheresi hanno lavorato alla produzione. Resto un pacifista convinto.
- Фильм Нюрнберг
Русский язык / Русский0 correctionsLast activity: 2026-01-04lakosgaborФильм Нюрнберг
Вчера днём я ходил в кинотеатр «Урания», прибыльный кинотеатр в центре Будапешта. Я посмотрел новый американский фильм «Нюрнберг» с великолепным актёром Расселом Кроу. Хотя фильм длился почти два с половиной часа, он был захватывающим всё это время… Название фильма меня очень заинтересовало, потому что я не знал, что у немецкого города Нюрнберга есть похожее, но немного по-другому написанное английское название: Nurenberg. Я также заметил, что над производством работало много венгров. Я остаюсь убеждённым пацифистом.
- Nurenberg (Film)
Deutsch0 correctionsLast activity: 2026-01-04lakosgaborNurenberg (Film)
Gestern Nachmittag war ich im Kino namens Urania, einem lukrativen Palast in der Innenstadt Budapests. Ich habe mir den neuen amerikanischen Film Nürnberg mit dem großartigen Schauspieler Russell Crowe angesehen. Obwohl der Film fast zweieinhalb Stunden gedauert hat, war er die ganze Zeit lang spannend… Der Titel des Films war für mich sehr interessant, weil ich nicht gewusst habe das die deutsche Stadt Nürnberg einen zwar ähnlichen, aber doch ein bisschen anders geschriebenen englischen Namen hat: Nurenberg. Es ist mir außerdem aufgefallen, dass viele Ungarn in der Produktion mitgewirkt haben. Ich bin und bleibe nach wie vor ein eingefleischter Pazifist.
- Free sentences 5English0 correctionsLast activity: 2026-01-02
foreignlanguages80Free sentences 5
1) Why does everything I love burn? Call the firemen! 2) I went inside and saw what seemed to be a man but was actually a cardboard silhouette. 3) If you see traffic on the road, let it to pass, then go across. 4) Watching “Christmas Carol” is always interesting. 5) What’s that mean? I don’t understand you! 6) You know you must be sober when you drive, don’t you? 7) Here’s a cube with our pictures on! Do you like it? 8) Go through the door, if you look well, you’ll see a staircase leading upstairs. Climb it. 9) “To be or not to be, that is the question”. Can’t this guy take a decision? 10) I’ll be watching attentively by the time you come to the field. Please, do your best to win this match!
- The first day of the yearEnglish0 correctionsLast activity: 2026-01-0155Olga
The first day of the year
The morning of the first day of the year is the most empty and quiet during the whole year in my country. Most of Russians are awakening up not early that in midday and this card represents their 1st January very well, as most usually drunk too much... For those who are able to eat, as breakfast, lunch and dinner are serves their last year’s salads. This joke (about last year’s salads) is the most popular on the 1st January. For the New Year people cook so much food, that they could eat it almost during their all long holidays. Although some food is spoils and throwns away. People rather will throw away excessive, than have a lack of something. For those who can’t eat this day, the best nectars are cucumber brine and mineral water. In general the first January passes under the auspices of lazy lying in front of the TV, eating and drunking again. For some, in this vein passes the whole 10 days. Although usually people visit friends and relatives, walking, buying up tickets to all available events and entertainments, thereby creating crowds and price increases everywhere. This time the snow for the New Year got almost the whole country. It snowed not only in my region, but even in our subtropic - in Sochi and Crimea. These one are especially lucky this year, they got snow exactly on the New Year and a couple of days later it will melt under the +15C, while we got this ”wonder” for uncertainly a long time. On the New Year night we got a real frost - the temperature fall down in some places of the region to a record -18C, which for us is very cold and untypical. However, today we are returning to a slight plus and another portion of snow storm from our conveyor, which is the Baltic Sea.
- Boldog Új Évet kívanok
Magyar / Magyar nyelv0 correctionsLast activity: 2026-01-01
SprachenfanBoldog Új Évet kívanok
Ma január 1-jén és az év csak kéves óra van. Mit hoz majd az év? Remélhetőleg sok jobb és szebb dolgot mint a régi év. Az a biztos, hogy tovább fogom tanulni a magyar nyelvet, noha nem haladok olyan gyorsan, ahogy szeretném. A leckék a duolingón elégnek lenni néhány hónapra és számtalan érdekes oldal talalható az interneten a tanuláshoz. Nagyon szeretnék első történeteket olvasni magyarul, de sajnos értem túl kéveset. Is lehet, hogy fogom a lengyellen kezdeni idén. Van ugyanis egy lengyel unokahúgom, még akkor soha nem találkoztam vele. Majd meglátjuk!