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- A sip of autumn
English0 correctionsLast activity: 2025-09-22
55OlgaA sip of autumn
...the rest of the people, attracted by the very warm day, migrate in a procession from the coast. So, the rest of the ice cream has eaten, the last warm summer like day has lived. Obviously, it was the last day of meteorological summer. The cold air mass is already near. From tomorrow the temperature are going to decrease for 11 degrees. For the whole next week day temperatures are going to be about +15C with cold clear nights about +8C. And there are not far the time when in the mornings grass will dress with grey hair of frosts. Classic anticyclonic weather will bring to us clear, sunny days, without winds and precipitation. It will do its deal fast - exactly such weather is giving to us autumn colors. Until now autumn doesn’t feel particularly. Just some trees, especially birch trees is turning yellow and slowly drop their first leaves. The sun is still gentle and warming. Actually, autumn is well, pleasant time, although a bit sad. I like autumn for its charmingly sadly- poetic mood and bright colors. To be honest, I like it just in the first two months, until the last leaf is still on the tree... To all seasons is appropriate its own flavor. In autumn to replace the ice cream goes cocoa. The right cocoa is hot, velvety mass with gentle chocolate taste, it’s sweet, but not too much, it’s warming and enveloping, giving right autumn mood. With this drink is pleasant to contemplate, to follow to the falling leaf. Another autumn drink for me is cider - sparkling wonder in a wineglass, rich by its apple flavor. Which is especially good in a sunny day, just as sparkling and cheerful, as a freshly uncorked bottle of cider. Ah, how nice, how pleasant this months are - warm summer like September and golden, poetic October, the last two sips of lightness and beauty...
- Travel Broadens the MindEnglish0 correctionsLast activity: 2025-09-20
CEDRICLANARRETravel Broadens the Mind
They say that travel broadens the mind; it can even open the eyes of the willfully blind. My journeys definitely had a huge impact on mine; as a result, I often find myself going against the tide. To be honest, just growing up in Guadeloupe had already given me a particular outlook. I traveled to study, also did it just for fun and went as far as the Land of the Rising Sun. But my most transformative experience, to say the least, was spending close to a year in the Middle East. Knowing Arabic gave me access to information you’re not likely to get from your average radio station. I also have to mention my stay in Cuba and my trips to the US, especially Louisiana. If you know a little bit of history, you’ll understand why it really felt like home to me.