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Revelation of nature
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Revelation of nature
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Revelation of nature
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In April you can watch nature in its special gentle condition.
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In April you can watch nature in its special gentle state.
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It’s time when buds on trees are turning to young leaves.
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It’s the time when buds on trees are turning into young leaves.
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These leaves are very small and glossy, very gentle and pretty ones.
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These leaves are very small and glossy, such gentle and pretty ones.
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They don’t give a shadow yet, but make trees and the world around brighter and more beautiful.
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They don’t give shade yet, but make trees and the surrounding world brighter and more beautiful.
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I like look at these young leaves and through it to the blue sky and to the warm spring sun which rays yet still can reach me through young leaves.
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I like looking at these young leaves and through it to the blue sky and the warm spring sun by which its rays yet still can reach me.
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I like looking at these young leaves and through them to the blue sky and to the warm spring sun whose rays yet still can reach me through young leaves.
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The sun shines as if through a translucent veil.
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I admire this picture, it’s a kind of nature revelation.
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I admire this picture. It’s a kind of natural revelation.
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I can enjoy it just two times in a year- in April, while leaves are just opening and in October, when they are falling and again gave this special vail affect.
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I can enjoy it just twice each year - in April while leaves are just opening and in October when they are falling and again give this special veil effect.
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I can enjoy it just two times in a year- in April, while leaves are just opening and in October, when they are falling and again giving this special veil effect.
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In summer leafage is too thick, it doesn’t let the sun rays go through it.
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In summer leafage is too thick, not letting the sun rays go through it.
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In winter trees are too bare and besides the sun usually even doesn’t try to reach me.
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In winter trees are too bare and, besides, the sun usually doesn’t try to even reach me.
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Poets often praise dense canopy, saving shadow and so on.
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Poets often praise a dense canopy, its rescuing shade and so on.
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Our weather is so, that usually we don’t need those shelters.
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Our weather is such that usually we don’t need these shelters.
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Rather we want to be open to the sun and its warmth.
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In addition, there are ofen winds which reduce the perceived temperature.
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In addition, there are often winds which reduce the perceived temperature.
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So I always reach for the sun like a young shoot.
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And now it’s especially pleasant to sit in a chair under the warm sun, looking at the awakening nature, listening the birds and understanding that you have absolutely everything to be happy.
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And now it’s especially pleasant to sit in a chair under the warm sun, looking at the awakening nature, listening to the birds and understanding that you’ve got absolutely everything to be happy about.
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And now it’s especially pleasant to sit in a chair under the warm sun, looking at the awakening nature, listening to the birds and understanding that you have absolutely everything to be happy.