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The rage of the elements

The rage of the elements

The rage of the elementsWhat a shame that I lost yesterday’s sunset!It’s really uncomfortable on the shore under this strong wind.

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The rage of the elements

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The rage of the elements

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What a shame that I lost yesterday’s sunset!

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The weather forecast said there can be rain, becides, the wind was quite strong.

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The weather forecast said there can be rain. Besides that, the wind was quite strong.

The weather forecast said there can be rain,. bBecsides that, the wind was quite strong.

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So I wasn’t resist much, believing that the conditions don’t suitable I stayed at home.

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So I wasn’t resisting myself too much to stay at home, believing that the conditions outside weren’t suitable.

So I wasn’t resisting myself too much to stay at home, believing that the conditions doutside weren’t suitable I stayed at home.

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How cruelly I was deceived, how pity I felt seeing the beautiful colors of sunset which just partly reached my windows and not to see it in all its beauty on the sea shore...

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How cruelly I was deceived. What pity I felt seeing the beautiful colours of the sunset which just partly reached my windows and not being able to see it in all its beauty on the seashore...

How cruelly I was deceived,. Whowat pity I felt seeing the beautiful colours of the sunset which just partly reached my windows and not being able to see it in all its beauty on the sea shore...

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To the morning the wind was going to become even stronger, so I wasn’t going to go to the sunrise too.

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In the morning the wind was going to become even stronger, so I wasn’t going to go to the sunrise too.

ToIn the morning the wind was going to become even stronger, so I wasn’t going to go to the sunrise too.

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However, I awaked at half past four and was desperate this time not to do the same mistake as yesterday.

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However, I woke at half past four and was desperate this time not to make the same mistake as yesterday.

However, I awaoked at half past four and was desperate this time not to domake the same mistake as yesterday.

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The wind is really quite strong, although it isn’t so bad, as I was expected.

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The wind was really quite strong, although it wasn’t so bad as I was expecting.

The wind iwas really quite strong, although it iwasn’t so bad, as I was expecteding.

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We are just forgot what strong winds are, during our unlikely calm and cold winter.

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We had just forgot what strong winds are during our unlikely calm and cold winter.

We hared just forgot what strong winds are, during our unlikely calm and cold winter.

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The last stormy gusts were yet in December.

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The last stormy gusts were back in December.

The last stormy gusts were yetback in December.

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But now the elements return to fun and rage on the Baltic again.

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But now the elements are returning to fun and rage on the Baltic again.

But now the elements are returning to fun and rage on the Baltic again.

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The sea and the wind now are rightful owners of the coast.

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The sea and wind are now the rightful owners of the coast.

The sea and the wind are now arthe rightful owners of the coast.

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They covered up the man’s track, making the coast completely wild and free of people’s presence.

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They covered up man’s tracks, making the coast completely wild and free of people’s presence.

They covered up the man’s tracks, making the coast completely wild and free of people’s presence.

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It’s really uncomfortable on the shore under this strong wind.

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However, I know a quiet harbor, where you are quite protected from the westerly wind.

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However, I know a quiet harbour, where you are quite protected from the westerly wind.

However, I know a quiet harbour, where you are quite protected from the westerly wind.

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Huge pine trees here don’t wave their branches so furiously, although even they are time to time swaying и dangerously creaking.

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Huge pine trees here don’t wave their branches so furiously, even though they are from time to time swaying and dangerously creaking.

Huge pine trees here don’t wave their branches so furiously, aleven though even they are from time to time swaying иand dangerously creaking.

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I can hear and see huge waves which driven by the wind to the shore, see an abundance of foam and spray over the water, but here I’m not so open to the wind and can quite comfortable to met the sunrise.

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I can hear and see huge waves which driven by the wind to the shore and see an abundance of foam and spray over the water, but here I’m not so open to the wind and can quite comfortably met the sunrise.

I can hear and see huge waves which driven by the wind to the shore, and see an abundance of foam and spray over the water, but here I’m not so open to the wind and can quite comfortabley to met the sunrise.

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The colors of it are a bit pale today, but anyway I’m happy that I’ve come.

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The colours of it are a bit pale today, but anyway I’m happy that I’ve come.

The colours of it are a bit pale today, but anyway I’m happy that I’ve come.

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The riot of the elements is mesmerizing by its strength, power and wild beauty.

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The riot of the elements is mesmerizing in its strength, power and wild beauty.

The riot of the elements is mesmerizing byin its strength, power and wild beauty.

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Certainly it worth those efforts and minor inconveniences to be here, to breathe this air and see this rage of the elements.

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Certainly it was worth those efforts and minor inconveniences to be here, to breathe this air and see this rage of the elements.

Certainly it was worth those efforts and minor inconveniences to be here, to breathe this air and see this rage of the elements.