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Spring days
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Spring days
Spring days
Spring daysThe first spring month has passed.However, there were some who weren’t so happy with the calm sea.It’s our Baltic surfers.Their days have come after all.The most volatile month of the year is here.Actually I have nothing against surfing itself.There is rather their approach to it which is annoying.
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Spring days
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The first spring month has passed.
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It took out with it remnants of snow and winter, awakening nature.
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It took out with it the remnants of snow and winter, while it had been awakening nature.
It took out with it the remnants of snow and winter, while it had been awakening nature.
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It was incredibly stable, quite and dry March, with lots of sun during the day and clear sky with many stars at night, which also means warm days with cool nights.
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It was an incredibly stable and quite a dry March, with lots of sun during the day and clear sky with many stars at night, which also meant warm days with cool nights.
It was an incredibly stable, and quite and dry March, with lots of sun during the day and clear sky with many stars at night, which also meanst warm days with cool nights.
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There wasn’t strong winds, so I was lucky and swam almost each morning.
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There wasn’t strong winds, so I was lucky and swam almost each morning. (perfectly fine)
There wasn’t strong winds, so I was lucky and swam almost each morning. (perfectly fine)
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However, there were some who weren’t so happy with the calm sea.
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It’s our Baltic surfers.
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I often saw them those days while they were drifting on their boards on the calm sea surface.
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I often saw them during such days while they were drifting on their boards on the calm sea surface.
I often saw them thoduring seuch days while they were drifting on their boards on the calm sea surface.
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I don’t like them much, as surfers always mean crowd.
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I don’t like them much, as surfers always mean crowds.
I don’t like them much, as surfers always mean crowds.
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It seems they have a heightened herd instinct, as they can’t come alone, there is always a group of them.
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It seems they have a heightened herd instinct, as they can’t come alone. There is always a group of them.
It seems they have a heightened herd instinct, as they can’t come alone,. tThere is always a group of them.
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They are coming on lots of cars, with accompanying persons and a photographer of course.
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They are coming in lots of cars, with accompanying people and a photographer of course.
They are coming oin lots of cars, with accompanying personsple and a photographer of course.
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It’s always a crowd, which making noise and leave behind themselve trash..
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It’s always a crowd, which is making noise and leaving behind after themselves rubbish..
It’s always a crowd, which is making noise and leaveing behind after themselves traubbish..
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Their days have come after all.
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The most volatile month of the year is here.
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April by its custom bringing one extreme after another - one day is extremely warm, the other is very cold, one day is calm, and the other is taking a hurricane and winds.
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April customarily is bringing one extreme after another - one day is extremely warm, the other is very cold, one day is calm and the other drags along with it a hurricane and winds.
April by its customarily is bringing one extreme after another - one day is extremely warm, the other is very cold, one day is calm, and the other idrags takilong with it a hurricane and winds.
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West winds have started to rise the waves, putting a cross over my morning swimming for at least a week.
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Westerly winds have started to raise waves, ending my morning swimming for at least a week.
Westerly winds have started to raise the waves, puttending a cross over my morning swimming for at least a week.
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At the same time the surfers time has come, they are already here, with all their belongings and most importantly with photographers.
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At the same time the westerlies have brought with them surfing waves. Surfers are already here, with all their belongings and -most importantly - photographers.
At the same time the surfwers terlimes hasve cbrome,ught with theym surfing waves. Surfers are already here, with all their belongings and -most importantly with- photographers.
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Actually I have nothing against surfing itself.
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There is rather their approach to it which is annoying.
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Anyway it’s a sin to complain while it’s nice spring time and you are completely free and independent of nothing.
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Anyway it’s a sin to complain while it’s nice spring time and you are completely free and not dependent on anything.
Anyway it’s a sin to complain while it’s nice spring time and you are completely free and inot dependent ofn anoything.
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So let’s instead enjoy each of the moment which the life giving us.
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So let’s instead enjoy each moment which life’s giving us.
So let’s instead enjoy each of the moment which the life’s giving us.